Outlining

1.      INTRODUCTION:

Thesis: I admire my father because of some reasons which are; being patient, being in harmony with everything and his effort on people’s life.

2.      BODY PARAGRAPH 1:

Opening sentence: Being patient is the most important behavior of my father.

Detail 1: He does not have any impulsive behaviors.

Detail 2: He has lots of little children and he can communicate them in a great way.

Detail 3: In his life, he shows his patience in every events come him.

3.      BODY PARAGRAPH 2:

Transition/Opening sentence: Another reason for me to admire my father is; he is always in harmony with everything.

Detail 1: He started to be in harmony after joined Aikido classes.

Detail 2: He never ignores anything which comes to him.

Detail 3: He always put himself to people’s shoes.

4.      BODY PARAGRAPH 3:

Transition/Opening sentence: Besides his these characteristics, he is important for me with his effort on people’s life.

Detail 1: He has a lot of efforts on us as a father.

Detail 2: He always tries to do something for people.

Detail 3: Struggling for people is the reason why he chose training with little children.

5.      CONCLUSION:

Reconfirmed Thesis: As I mentioned, there are many reasons for me to admire my father. I learned him; if you be patient, be in harmony and struggle for other people you can be admired.  

1.      INTRODUCTION:

Thesis: Childhood is the best period for people to discover their skills. There are many things which can be tried by people for being aware of if they have ability on it or not. Art is one of these things. It can affect people in some ways which are creativity, imagination and cultural.

2.      BODY PARAGRAPH 1:

Opening sentence: If a person’s creativity appears in his early ages, he can improve it fast than others can do.

Detail 1: Children can discover their skills easily.

Detail 2: Children can create free.

3.      BODY PARAGRAPH 2:

Transition/Opening Sentence: Besides creativity’s rise, people can also improve their imagination better in their childhood with art.

Detail 1: Children have no problem in their minds so they can focus their work easily.

Detail 2: Children’s imagination is heavy than adults’.

Detail 3: Children feel free when making art. They have no filter in their mind.

4.      BODY PARAGRAPH 3:

Transition/Opening Sentence: Moreover, art is a culture and children should bring up with it.

Detail 1: Culture comes from people inside and it is created in childhood.

Detail 2: Art can also grow with children.

Detail 3: Children can create their future through their art education.

5.      CONCLUSION:

Reconfirmed Thesis: In conclusion, art affects our development and it is necessary for us. It means that we should make children be aware of importance of art and there is just one way to apply it to children, art education.

1.      INTRODUCTION:

Thesis: In today’s world foreign language is very important for living. There are many things about it. However, there is one point that people still arguing; why do we need to learn a foreign language before puberty? There are many reasons such as, catching the information easily, their request for foreign people and their education.

2.      BODY PARAGRAPH 1:

Opening Sentence: Human brain catch the information easily in childhood.

Detail 1: The information which is learned before puberty can be nonvolatile.

Detail 2: People, before puberty, have a fresh brain to take information.

Detail 3: People, before puberty, have fewer things to think than people, after puberty.

3.      BODY PARAGRAPH 2:

Thesis/Opening Sentence: Besides catching information easily, after puberty, children can want to talk with foreign people. That is why foreign language should be learnt before puberty.

Detail 1: They can want to exchange letters with foreign people.

Detail 2: They can want to be in abroad.

Detail 3: They can want to meet foreign people.

4.      BODY PARAGRAPH 3:

Thesis/Opening Sentence: There is also another point about that, knowledge of foreign language before puberty is important for their serial education.

Detail 1: They may choose their secondary school which use foreign language in every lesson.

Detail 2: They may want to go to foreign country to continue their education.

5.      CONCLUSION:

Reconfirmed Thesis: As I mentioned there are many benefits of learning foreign language before puberty which are catching the information easily, their request for foreign people and their education. If you think its benefits you can see the differences between a person who learns foreign language before puberty and a person who does not.